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The pain is unbearable
Ready to kill
You need one more hit
Just a small fix
To make you forget
The tears roll down
Your blood streaked face
And you wonder WHY
A god would let you live this way
©2004-2010 ~faunzy
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and finallly, the last poem i have for you...for now...its about a drug addict...i tihnk thats rather obvious though...lol. look, read, comment.

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=osyris Dec 20, 2004, 1:10:24 AM
Any god is a parent...and as such, all the good ones must let their children discover they own way. We can only be sheltered for so long and sometimes there is no one to 'make it all better'. Strength only comes from indurance; and indurance usually means pain.

Nice work. ;)

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"Real danger isn't facing the fiercest enimy. No...The greatest danger is being overcome by your own fear. Even if you face something you can't comprehend...accept it!" -[Gelda, Battle Angel: Last Order, Vol. 1]
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~faunzy Dec 20, 2004, 2:23:53 AM
heh, thanks. and about that all the good ones must let their children discover they own way, mine arent all that good then...lol :P

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"I got lost in thought. It was unfamiliar territory."
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=osyris Dec 20, 2004, 2:25:19 AM
Same here...but they'll learn. ;)

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"Real danger isn't facing the fiercest enimy. No...The greatest danger is being overcome by your own fear. Even if you face something you can't comprehend...accept it!" -[Gelda, Battle Angel: Last Order, Vol. 1]
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~XVoodoo-LishusX Apr 14, 2005, 7:39:02 PM
Hey! You know, when people swab they're throats, diseases are found just sitting there. like HIV. So when you cut yourself open like that, think of how many diseases enter your body through the air!! 8D

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Come and praise Adonai.
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~XVoodoo-LishusX Apr 14, 2005, 7:39:57 PM
And i'm jewish.. 0@

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Come and praise Adonai.
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~faunzy Apr 14, 2005, 7:57:26 PM
wow...but, im sure you wouldnt make a comment like that about a person getting a piercing, yet their stabbing themselves really, and forcing the wound to stay open. heh, sorry, feel like arguing :P. and really, the point of this all was the poem, not the picture...o.O thanks though.

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"I got lost in thought. It was unfamiliar territory."
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~faunzy Apr 14, 2005, 7:58:12 PM
sorry...im lost on that...:|

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"I got lost in thought. It was unfamiliar territory."
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~XVoodoo-LishusX Apr 15, 2005, 2:48:01 PM
XD Pretty poem, though. But yeah, i'm just completely paranoid about diseases..

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Come and praise Adonai.
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~XVoodoo-LishusX Apr 15, 2005, 2:48:12 PM
"pretty" as in "meaningful"

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Come and praise Adonai.
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